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monkmaster
2008-11-26, 18:29
I am a lazy boy upon a la-z-boy
New big screen TV
It's empty box in the corner
The precision glow of the pixel
Warming
My Home

Economy...gone?
My TV...pawned.
Now I'm a lazy boy with no place to laze
The postman arrives with a sorrowful gaze
Foreclosure
My Home

A lazy boy is what they call me
Sitting on my curb-front lawn
'Life's good' is what I see
The ink running from the damp corrugate
LG
My Home

bornkiller
2008-11-27, 21:43
Reminds me of wall street. nice!

Anarchist88
2008-12-02, 20:31
i like it. i like how it twists so suddenly. the contrast is pretty. i kind of loled at the " shitting on mi fron lawn " part. good job